10-4-20_20 will I remember?

(10-4-20: The Language Game – Part 20 of 20)
(draft 2009-10-26)
First, the verbs.

Then, the English original

Finally, my attempt, followed by all the comments that either mark the mistakes or propose a new version 🙂

The verbs

breken, brak, h i gebroken

to break

gaan, ging, i gegaan

to go

herinneren, herinnerde, h herinnerd

to recall, remember, remind

laden, laadde, h geladen

to load

nemen, nam, h genomen

to take

scheppen, schiep, h geschapen

to create

springen, sprong, h i gesprongen

to burst, explode, jump, leap, spring

veranderen, veranderde, h i veranderd

to alter, change

wensen, wenste, h gewenst

to wish

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zwemmen, zwom, h i gezwommen

to swim

will I remember?

break [breken] the waves while swimming [zwemmen]
jump [springen] to go [gaan] on top (bovenop)
but remember [herinneren]: do not overload (te zwaar beladen) yourself
take [nemen] your time to alter [veranderen] your routine.
and you will create [scheppen] what you wish [wensen].

zal ik het me herinneren?

Breek de golven terwijl je zwemt.
Spring om bovenop te gaan
maar herinner: belaad jezelf niet te zwaar
neem je tijd om jou routine te veranderen
en je zal scheppen wat wenst je.